Such heavy stones are flying,
Amazing here trees are crying.
Dying grasses mind is buying,
Water in chest is space lying.
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Imagination is liberated here to bring joy from things that do not behave as if confined and controlled by law. I do not know any other way to enjoy this poem but to fly with stones and rivers. Thanks for sharing.n
I can vouch for the philosophical undertones from beginning to the end of the poem and love remains a binding force for all human beings. Liked it very much. Thanks, Kumarmani ji.
Stones are melting by love touch, Doves are kissing sky very much. We see flow of love in far clutch, Amazing tale this is true as such. Read the poem several times, Finding the self in all rhymes. Really stones melt by love touch, I agree with you very much. Loved reading and commenting, ................................... ... .10
This is a poem filled with wonders, in which heavy things that don't move, and rooted things that stay in one place, all such things are liberated, fly around and make us accept a reality that will never stop surprising us. Your poem is the antidote to boredom, an encouragement to joy, a liberation of the spirit.
I don't claim I understood this highly abstract poem of yours. But, it has a mysterious charm that made me read it again and again several times. Thanks for sharing. A 10 for that charm, Sir.
Yes, it's a miracle, it's amazing! they move of course only by Godly blessing. some people don't beleive that it's easy. just look up to the sky - stones are fleeting!
Love makes even the hardest stones (hearts) melt. Lovely enjoyable poem.
I am sure that the original thoughts, before being translated into English were even more beautiful but I enjoyed this poem thoroughly anyway. Thanks
It is only a poetic heart which can witness things usually average people can not see happening. Poet also capable of making others too see things like stones are flying, trees are crying and so forth. That's how a poet becomes unique. Great job Kumar. Enjoyed. +10.
I reviewed this outstanding poem this morning, seems got deleted anyways, I got the opportunity to read it once again, Sublime and everything gets summed up in a single line: Stones are melting in sky by love touch............10++++
What a rhyming touch. Poetic beauty. Perfect