Thursday, May 14, 2009

Stones Comments

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Stones of the future are like diamonds,
Glistening in the moonlight of our wishes;
Youth will be harder still until the world has ended,
My hard stones are like a conquest of a kingdom,
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Naveed Akram
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Catrina Heart 14 May 2009

Colourful and precious......Thanks!

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Joseph Poewhit 14 May 2009

Though stines only have value from man's vanity.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Marvelous, used nice metaphor. Short and deep.

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Naveed Akram

Naveed Akram

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