Tuesday, August 8, 2006

Stone Observer Comments

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I sit above the entrance, weathered weary and worn
I've been doomed to remain here forever since this church was born
Stone observer, I watch as people come and go
And I love these people so but they never seem to know
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Laura Greene
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Beautifully described. Did I detect a reference to your lack of experience due to your lack of years? I can't believe you can write like this at seventeen! Esra Sloblock

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Viren Dangwal 08 August 2006

laura darling, your observations are so humane, so perfect poetically! how about writing and writing and writing and ofcourse, reading a lot(including some contemporary poetry) affly Viren Dangwal

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