Sunday, May 29, 2016

Stone Cold Comments

Rating: 5.0

You've left and you've took everything with you
Nothing else matters but me feeling trapped
I wish I could understand
How I no longer an hold your hand
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Bill Cantrell 29 May 2016

Your poetry carried me into your pain, deprived of companionship, the terrible void that carries not as much as a reflection or an echo of that touch that we so desire, your poem is vert touching and at a place where emotions speak so vivid, great work.

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Melissa Patty 30 May 2016

Thankyou so much for this beautiful comment. It means a lot! God Bless

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