Monday, July 27, 2009

* Stone Cold Comments

Rating: 3.1

a common thread in
dreams a dreaded stone terrace affords
misty foggy view of shuddering views from
height above clouds from a
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Lee Crowell
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Bad heavens! This is really scary stuff Lee. You've managed to write an extremely powerful poem. I would much rather have a ride on a rotor (In Luna Park in Sydney a person spins around stuck to a wall while the floor disappears) . Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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Vaibhav Pandey 01 August 2009

very intense poem sir....I liked it..10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 July 2009

This piece of writing reminds me of something similar, 'A Humerous Death'.I'm feeling a bit pushy at the moment. Cheers Lee.

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