Thursday, August 28, 2008

Stone Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are the reason for my pain,
You are the reason I stand in the rain.

I wouldn't be here by choice,
...
Read full text

Bethany Maxwell
COMMENTS
Yash Shinde 23 October 2012

loved the metaphors............your emotions flow so smoothly are distictively visible...........loved it dear

0 0 Reply

A Compelling Cry for freedom.Feeling the pain while standing in the rain but I will never give up until I make some gain. Well written.

0 0 Reply
Vampire Heart 28 August 2008

Wonderful poem, well written, love the metaphoric vocabulary, alot of emotions burst out from the poem, lovely

0 0 Reply
Bethany Maxwell

Bethany Maxwell

some where in this universe muhahaha
Close
Error Success