Stone And Pain Comments

aptly metaphorical, great poetry. wish you poet early recovery.

Beautiful write from your pen. Very true said, stone threw the life, out of gear...Its really a painful condition. Wish you a speedy recovery!

Woah one of yor best poems! A tour de force. It seems so much like a socio-political scene in great rhymin but u meant it for a stony uproar inside d abdomen! Woah, imaginative metaphor then sir! .votes 10

As Shahzia has stated, I too thought it was about the protest of some environmentalists on the issue of building a dam, until I read the poet's notes! I understand that a bigger kidney stone can give excruciating pain! Thank God, expert hands removed the 'rock' and also the pain! Interesting! ! Wish you a speedy recovery! !

The context of the poem is telling all bhajaan, Get well soon! The poem is special for its analogy of the dam, and if we set aside the context and see the surface level it appears as a shaped up poem for some true facts too, (i mean what you symbolically said about Dam and the other related issues) and well-connected to the physical state, not only your own but whoever suffers from such condition...it has a meaning and meaningfulness! many thanks for your assessment of the Fall! regards...!