Thursday, December 14, 2017

Stone Comments

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Stone

There is so much we can learn from stone.....
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Kusum Gala
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Shikha Mahajan 08 June 2020

The transformation journey from stone to sand was really commendably described in words. Thank you

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Kusum Gala 14 December 2017

Thanks for the encouraging words. I appreciate the feedback. Thanks to all who commented on my poem. -Kusum

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 14 December 2017

Best way to be like nothing can break or bend. Good one

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 14 December 2017

Yes, roughness and toughness are only a state of one stage of matter. Naturally it transforms in to others. If one desires to hasten the process to one's need, it is possible too. Interesting write. Please read my haiku on Sculptor. Thanks Kusum for the inspiring poem.

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Ravi Kopra 14 December 2017

Kusum, you are creative. Your poem sounded like one of a Pablo Neruda's odes to common things. Keep writing..

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Gajanan Mishra 14 December 2017

beautiful write, wiped off with a wave.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 December 2017

Stone is definitely strong, tough and determined. This is an interesting and beautiful poem nicely penned. Nature teaches many things...10

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