Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Stolen (Lost Poem Retrieved) Comments

Rating: 4.9

You took all the words from my lips
And left me with nothing to say
Then stole the bright sun from my sight
Thus chasing the daylight away
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Valerie Dohren
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Walterrean Salley 25 April 2013

Thanks for this revealing poem, Val, which shows exactly what life can do. Well crafted.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 20 April 2013

I thought the lost poem was actually retrieved and with a happy mind started reading this! But lo! You have made out another poem with a tenacious heart! Good, Valerie, i loved this lovely poem with excellent rhyme and rhythm.

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Danny Draper 05 April 2013

A poem of strength and resilience defiant to the last.

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