Friday, August 21, 2009

' ' ' ' Stolen Laughter(For Junie) Comments

Rating: 2.9

My soul
disguised as a shadow

drifted back
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Dónall Dempsey
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Marvin Tordillos 30 March 2017

seeing my soul stealing my sister’s laughter but not recognising it seeing only When you realized the value of a person after they are gone, that's what I feel in this. Have to give this 10 :)

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Nikunj Sharma 29 August 2009

poignant, touching and full of feeling and love........very nicely written.

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Fay Slimm 21 August 2009

The comfort of memory when we have lost someone dear to us is brought out so very well - you have captured the essence too of the difficulty at times of retaining those memories. Your work aways leaves the reader with much to think on Donal....10 from Fay.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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