Tuesday, May 10, 2016

Stolen Kisses Comments

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I stole a kiss one time,
Maybe, it was two.
It was all about me,
And less about you.
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Bill Galvin
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Mike Smith 31 May 2016

You told Chinonso that you wish you didn't have to write it. I think that a lot of good writes come about this way. Perhaps you stole the kisses, and it wasn't meant to be. But you gifted the poem and balanced the scales. Thanks for sharing

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Bill Galvin 31 May 2016

The grand thing is, Mike, she and I do share a special bond and a good friendship. I have written about it, but, she's the only one who's read them. I will not embarrass anyone for the sake of publishing. Being a guy, of course, I was hoping for more. C'est la vie! And, thank you.

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Chinonso Iroegbu 14 May 2016

They were your good tries, But they were your goodbyes, Since you knew, down deeply, We were just not meant to be. A very beautiful poem, full of love poignant and pretence. Nice work! Chinonso

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Bill Galvin 14 May 2016

Thanks, Chinonso... I wish I did not have to write it.

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