Golden leaves flutter down
Around the girl in the gown
With laurel in her hair.
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one of your best, this is the genre you know and love and it really allows you to communicate all the fullness a poem should. The rhyme scheme does take a while to get used to but that gives it depth. Great job here. -landrey
wow! i love this poem. ive read some of ur other poems and this is the best one ive read! kind regards-sophie