Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Stolen Innocence Comments

Rating: 4.5

Her face is beauty
Yet marred by the pain in her eyes.
The tears she sheds
Fall to the ground
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Sunny Grace
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Phanice Wamukota 01 July 2015

Awwwwwwww, so sad. And thieves of such should be castrated.

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Caroline Weeks 09 April 2009

Beautiful! Every line sucks you in...well-penned. Caroline

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Simple. Tragic. Lovely. George x

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Rosalita Fernandez 08 April 2009

this is a touching poem, written from the heart, nicely done, perfect 10 again!

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Carmen Johnson 08 April 2009

I like this poem. Read my poem, when I was three. It borders on the same line. Then again, most of my poems have the effects of stolen childhood/Innocence

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