Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Stolen Innocence Comments

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He holds the blade to my throat
I feel his hot breath on my cheek
His hand slowly slides down my back
He says he'll kill me if I scream
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Reecy M
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Serenity Prayer 27 January 2010

beautiful poem, it read very smoothly. as for what the poem was about...well, i have no words about that. idk why it happened. i am deeply sorry, though, that it happened to you. i know these are just typed out words that may or may not have any meaning to you, but i am still deeply sorry. i hope you are ok and are dealing with it all ok. i know it can be alot to deal with and may take a while to forget and move on from, but its ok. keep up the good work and hope you are doing well.

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Gutter Box 27 December 2008

This poem is so good...great job Very sad...but sometimes that is the hand that God deals us.

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Reecy M

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