My heart you stole away from me,
My love for you will always be.
You are so great to be around.
I know you would never want to let me down.
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I can see the ideas that you want to express in this poem, but would suggest (ever so kindly) that you edit out a lot of unnecessary words. I believe this would help it to flow much more easily. I have found all of your poems so enjoyable to read. :)
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I can see the ideas that you want to express in this poem, but would suggest (ever so kindly) that you edit out a lot of unnecessary words. I believe this would help it to flow much more easily. I have found all of your poems so enjoyable to read. :)