Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Stolen Freedom Comments

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I know that I will never be free,
As I gaze into destiny's eyes,
Black pits of melancholy,
Reflects the truth behind my lies,
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Maya Robena
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Jurietta Duraan 01 April 2008

The words are beautifully woven together.... I really like your poem and your insight into self. Yuri

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Brandon Brooks 01 April 2008

very nice. in this poem are you saying that you are searching for something and no matter how hopeless it seems you will never give up?

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