A wonderful feel to this narration, Mary. Lacking a call for pitious response I feel that the piece is warm in a sort of innocent humanity. There is a feeling that sharing is not always something one wants to do.
More so, there is also a very sexual side to this which I think is valid and a sort of unbiased approach to a loss of innocence.
Wonderfully structure, and well paced.
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A wonderful feel to this narration, Mary. Lacking a call for pitious response I feel that the piece is warm in a sort of innocent humanity. There is a feeling that sharing is not always something one wants to do. More so, there is also a very sexual side to this which I think is valid and a sort of unbiased approach to a loss of innocence. Wonderfully structure, and well paced.