Wednesday, May 31, 2006

~stolen Cherries~ Comments

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I prayed they wouldn't see me.
I'd hide between the branches.
They had no way of knowing
those cherries were all I'd have
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Mary Nagy
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Joseph Daly 01 June 2006

A wonderful feel to this narration, Mary. Lacking a call for pitious response I feel that the piece is warm in a sort of innocent humanity. There is a feeling that sharing is not always something one wants to do. More so, there is also a very sexual side to this which I think is valid and a sort of unbiased approach to a loss of innocence. Wonderfully structure, and well paced.

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