Sunday, May 15, 2022

Stolen Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh no! see how that bullet turns up
And, did life just depart her without hiccup! ?
Ick! I'm troubled by that pain on her face
But, how was she a menace! ?
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Jude Fuhnwi
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Larry Henn 15 May 2022

Such a powerful, very well articulated poem with a perfection depiction of the painful experiences of war and the ill-fate of leaders to resolve arm conflicts and save lives. This Poet is highly underrated. Congrats Sir

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