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Yes we know it happens, You have a way of letting us know their pain. So unreal I wish the case was. But throwing it in your face is what this world needs.

Thank you for your comments, I would just like to add that this piece is not something that has happened to me, or to anyone i know, the reality is that this does happen to some people, its a sad story to tell.

Very strong expression of so many inner feelings, thoughts, pain and turmoil. The repetition is effective in reinforcing the images. Remarkable that you were able to express so much of what was and is involved in this tragic incident retained and repeated so often and not to be ever forgotten or erased.

whoa...intense. its such a sad story. you always mezmerize me with your words and your story, linds. this is so powerful. another great write. *10* May