Friday, March 7, 2008
Stole Your Life Comments
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He destroyed your confidence, girl,
He’s the cause of your pain, girl
You got to be stronger than that, girl
Innocent girl you once were.
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7/31/2025 11:54:53 AM # 1.0.0
Strong and justifiably angry poem. I like the passion and indignation. Repetition of the word 'girl' is a staccato, natural echo throughout - and it reinforces the innocence of the victim. I like the powerful, simple, straightforward words and phrases (He drew your blood, girl) . Great ending line. Keep up the internal fire - passion makes the best poetry, and you have it.