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This short poem is beautiful.

Precise brilliant work... storm swirls from clouds or tree branches.... I am sure it is from your lines... I can hear... Good one Tsira Rema

Hello Tsira, Loyd here. Loved your poem, your profile and personality. Good work my poet friend. Please visit my poems when you can and thank you, L C Taylor

I truly admire this write of yours, thanks for sharing......

yes...a good warning this...and a mind boggling one at that. good work

Good poetic work.Small and sweet with adequate metaphor and diction I like it very much.my 10

Tsira, so much said in so few words. Wonderfully written. Top marks and thanks for sharing them my friend. David

I read this poem several times, each time, I ended with tale vision. I must be wrong- perhaps a spasm of thaugh-

Few words woven nicely so many things about life.NIce write