Sunday, November 15, 2009

Stingray Ballet Comments

Rating: 2.5

A warm, clear turquoise sea
Is the stage of a beautiful scene,
A majestic stingray ballet
Paints a picture so serene.
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Paul Holmes
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Felicity Koch 23 February 2015

I have always absolutely loved sting rays, and this poem is so beautifully written.

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Marieta Maglas 15 November 2009

wonderful simile: 'Like giant black butterflies Flying in a liquid sky, Two stingrays soar and glide Almost effortlessly past my eye.' wonderful descriptive poem, lovely rhymes 10

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