Thursday, October 17, 2024

Sting Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish you hadn't hurt me,
I wish you didn't live in my mind rent free,
But sometimes I just can't shift these thoughts,
And they sting just like a bee,
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Emma Jane Rae
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D.N. Rebb 18 October 2024

When one feels the stinger of a poem, it is well written. The way you express pain in your words is what makes this a great poem.

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The hurt, the pain, the agony of hurt self-respect all brought out excellently. Proud of you, dear poet. Top score

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