Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Stillness Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is this world, this silence?
The cracked paint on flaking walls
The still spiders clutching to the beams.
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George Price
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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2014

The idiocy and mundane falseness of today's world leaves little to be desired. That's why we poets must imagine and write what we see in our poetical minds so the rest of the world can have hope in a better, unstifled society, full of life and adventure. Love your poem. Dark can be good because it makes us appreciate the light that much more. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Terry O'leary 22 August 2013

Nice poem... why apologize? It's not your fault... You're only reflecting... Terry

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Valerie Dohren 14 August 2013

A good description of our modern world and its lack of character and quality. Great write George, enjoyed reading.

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