Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Stillborn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sob wrecked agony as the knots folded into themselves
and caught in between a burst of emotion
spilling out onto the sheets of pain
as life ebbed out and the heartbeat stilled.
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Marshall E Gass
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Valerie Dohren 09 April 2014

Beautiful and very poignant. Love the closing lines. You may like to read mine also entitled Stillborn.

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