Friday, August 7, 2009

Still Working Fine.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything around is in a slow motion,
Laziness is now a prominent emotion..
The mood surrounding is seemingly low,
Time in my watch too is ticking slow..
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Abhijit Surve
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Surya . 09 August 2009

the poet inside is still working. that was good news.it will revitalise you. voted your first 10 surya

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Maitreyee Joshi 08 August 2009

good to know that the poetic part of you is still in its zealous mood.thanks

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Lady Grace 07 August 2009

well done..rhyming words are alsways nice to read..nice to know that u r srill working fine..owww..take care....cheers..

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Obinna Eruchie 07 August 2009

Not easy to go through that as a poet, the important thing in writing is that one is 'Still working fine'. Well penned with a lovely theme.

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Ted M 07 August 2009

Sometimes you feel you are not productive enough. I suppose there are times, the mind and the body don't yield. Nice piece full of rhyme............

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Deborah Cromer 07 August 2009

Yes! The poet inside you is working fine! Nice piece of rhyme. When all else fails and you can do nothing...A good poet can always rhyme. :) Good set of mood and feeling in this poem. You have written it in a good informative way, but still leave it as entertaining. too. Nice combination of words and thoughts. You put them together very well. Deborah Cromer

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