Saturday, September 9, 2006
Still (What Would Have Been Dignified) Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I found myself alone.
Feet aching, head spinning
Taking a moment to rest.
Suddenly and sadly
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Goldy Locks
09 September 2006
sweet. - yeah, the ending is superb - that last line! vivid decor.
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Steve Hagget
09 September 2006
Excellent poem, Lauren - 'I just couldn't bear insignificance' is probably something that many people would agree with. Nicely captures the attention and is well written - steve
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9/2/2025 7:42:24 PM # 1.0.0
Catches perfectly a shatteringly sad moment. Next time, if there is one, I'm sure you'll have a dignified plan of action to call upon. Very atmospheric. jim