Every sixty seconds spent waiting,
On the reality to obtain promises,
Could be a minute of inheritance gone?
Never to come back and take chances.
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Congrats my friend. I am happy for you that this creative composition was selected as poem of the day!
With faith waiting is worth it, even though hope deferred makes the heart sick. Beautiful poem
Watching silent glimpse of self in next corner of waiting is mysterious but reality touches mind in waiting and poems come out. Awaking in the dark and proceeding towards light is definitely life's aim. Waiting for God is great in sense. Very amazing poem this is...I am rating 10 for this.
To obtain promises in life matters a lot. Every sixty seconds spent is waiting value more in life. Very amazing drafting that goes to next corner in waiting and reading. Interesting sharing....10
A nice poem that has been deservedly selected for the honor. 'Sitting awake in the dark still waiting, Being who I am claiming to be, The solitude of memory is everything, A secret at the time belong in me..' - Loved this stanza particularly more.
A minute of promise, at the expense of an inherited minute. Wow! Exceptionally visionary poem. Well deserved positioning and congrats. X
Really enjoyed this, highly original piece. Clever mastery articulating 'our' art of 'being'.
Beautifully envisioned meaningful and thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing it and heartiest congrats on it's selection as member Poem Of The Day.
Exceptionally crafted work, a good meditation on the benefits of patience. Great selection for Poem of the day!
There is hope! Keep the faith! ! As It is written: Wait I say, wait on the Lord, and He shall strengthen thine heart..
Patience indeed is a vertue. That point is well expressed in this beautiful poem. Congrats.
Hope! ! ! fulfilment of promise. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A great thoughtful poem, a well deserved selection as members' poem of the day, congrats.
Fascinating poem, Gerry. Congratulations for having it selected as Poem of the Day!
The essence and intricacies of patience as in waiting are aptly captured in the piece. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing Gerry.