Still Waiting Comments

This is so lovely and so haunting. So well said and crafted as always. Making me wish I had written it myself but oh so appreciative of having been able to read it. Thank you

This makes me want to know more. It feels like a very emotionally driven write. I especially like the repetition in the last stanza.

I love the last stanza in this piece....nice work

This is unquestionably a beautifully written and expressed poem, Laurie, one that evokes considerable empathy in all who read this extraordinary poem. I do not know how long you have been writing poetry, but I would guess it was not yesterday, not last month, or not last year, but for a considerable time to attain the skill you have achieved with words and emotions, and the ability to write such wonderful poems as this. Carl.