Saturday, February 13, 2021

Still Wait For Thy Welfare Comments

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It is a reality we can not meet even if we wish
It is also a reality our love is immortal

Else the urge to think of you always
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mamutty CHOLA 15 February 2021

THANKS SHARING YOUR INNER FEELINGS

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Susan Williams 14 February 2021

There is such a gentle yearning in this poem for a love or a friend or both in one--you did not protect yourself but laid your heart wide open. Well done

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Varsha M 13 February 2021

Indefinite wait is self killing. Workout for good or fo something else.

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Varsha M 13 February 2021

I think welfare requires action. If you really want to do someone, just do some act of goodness that can be witnessed. A good composition.

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