Sunday, October 14, 2012

Still There Comments

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Across the plains and grassy fields
Under skies of blue
The memories will rest forever
Eternally residing there
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Autumn Winds
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Dale Mullock 14 October 2012

I string of words that etches deeply in to the heart fo the reader... when you throw a stone in the water, it ripples out as it is stirred but a few moments later the water will be still again with no evidence that a stone was thrown... however under the surface the water's bed is forever changed and will be remembered by those of the time of when it landed, even if forgotten by the sands of time. Deep and good poetry here!

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