Still There Comments

i know exactly what you're feeling. i left my first love two years ago also. and everything you said, it still happens to me. crazy huh? you never forget you're first love, even if you have moved on.

aww..that was sad..heartbreaking...beautifully sweet also..i loved it.~Love, Eva

Tyrone, you did a wonderful job here of both expressing yourself and doing it in a rhyming way. That's what I love to see when I read poems. Kudos and best wishes. GW62

Wow, that's a deep and insightful poem. Such truth to it too!