Friday, January 15, 2016

Still There Comments

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no, she won't leave
not now
not ever
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Liilia Talts Morrison
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 January 2016

Very amazing poem composed in fine mind on flower and garden. Dwelling with the one who causes it all with soul is very amazing definitely. Very nicely drafted poem shared on.10

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Margaret O Driscoll 15 January 2016

So lovely, Liilia, so much in this poem, gardening is such a connection with mother earth, dacha gardens in your homeland so much a part of everyday lives, tending plants has it's own challenges like nurturing children, a motherly occupation in a way, spiritual even, 'was she not his helper who tended the garden faithfully', and the final verse, wow, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! ! ! ! The painting is amazing, surreal, spiritual, they compliment each other so well, bravo! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 January 2016

It is a very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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