Sunday, June 30, 2019

Still Still Life Comments

Rating: ★4.8

as i sit on the edge
         of the curb
     staring into Black Abyss Inevitable
         with my mind's eye
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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 June 2019

The style as also expression are simply superb and in contrast to the sucking of poison in lungs.Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 June 2019

dragging poison into my lungs much like sucking on the barrel of a loaded gun.........// written beautifully

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Justin Aptaker

Justin Aptaker

Denver, CO USA
Justin Aptaker
Justin Aptaker
Denver, CO USA
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