Thursday, December 31, 2009

Still Smiling........ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Smiled When Mother Took Me Into Her Arms For The First Time,
Smiled When Saw World Outside The Hospital For The First Time,
Smiled Whenever Went To School,
Smiled Even Being Laughed At....
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Apurva Jain
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I'm still smiling and was smiling through the whole poem.... Its a fantastic poem.... I can see a little signs of gothic poetry.... And its somewhat similar to my poem, but i never cried, i've used the negative word cried with the word never and made it positive and u've used a positive word smiled.... But ur poem is far better than mines.... :)

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Lady Grace 31 December 2009

smile tho my heart is aching.... smile even everything went wrong...smile..just smile..it will be fine...

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