Still! Quiet! ! Shhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! Comments

But little Ansa jumps and shouts! 'Look! there goes the star, Hye! it looks like a star'. Star comes closer 'khar khar khar' Lightens the path in patch And now the whole one. There it goes 'khar khar khar' a poetic short is this one.. innovative style of poetry... well written and the message in this poem is enough impressive... interesting... best of luck

Its a big WOW poem! ! finely penned! 10++++

Nice poem...Really dare to break the stillness.....Cheero...! ! !

nice mysterious poem, keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***