Friday, March 14, 2008

Still Of The Night Comments

Rating: 4.9

Moonlight falls over
the mountains
Coolness spreads
throughout the air
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Hemakumar Nanayakkara
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 13 December 2008

Hemakumar - You must be a peace with the world to see such beauty. Let this vision of this transformation of darkness go from your lips to God's ear, then to men's hearts. Blessings - Cheryl

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Bob Gibson 15 September 2008

You have painted such a serene picture, you have taken the reader into the depths of your poem. well done regards Bob

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Linda Moore 14 August 2008

Beautiful, it sounds so peaceful

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Viola Grey 10 August 2008

so refreshing to find beauty in the night...so few see so clearly...beautiful work

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Vilma Xelin 06 August 2008

lovely way to write my dear friend, so fresh, so happy, so younger soul! thanks for sharing! and keep writing I love to read you!

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Wendy Bureau 18 June 2008

What a poignant piece.. flow was perfect allowing the words to blend and roll off the tongue as fluent as flowing water.. brilliant imagery Fantastic read

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Alison Cassidy 11 May 2008

Love your liquid moon and the smooth pace of this poem which is in keeping with it's cool, nocturnal setting. Your share both a love of words and an artist's eye in this pretty poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Mamta Agarwal 05 May 2008

you have created very vivid picture of the silence of the night.please read my poems on similar lines-before the day breaks and and after the sunset.

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Bonnie Collins 22 April 2008

Very warm write, penned with so much tenderness, it is so well expressed you can actually feel the night setting in........Excellent! ! !

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Ernestine Northover 20 April 2008

Another lovely write and the imagery is a delight to read. You have a wonderful way of expressing the scenes in your work. Great to peruse. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Patricia Gale 17 April 2008

A masterpiece of the night.... wonderful.

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Sandra Fowler 13 April 2008

Excellent. You are a fine word painter. The last stanza resonates with this reader. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ben Gieske 01 April 2008

I like the imagery of your poem.

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Emancipation Planz 28 March 2008

This follows so beautifully on from Island of paradise... special times hey!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 March 2008

night vwhen shines by the flow of the moon making the nature as divine green as when clouds course on gently by the heaven onto the dew...................superb write with imagery of nature when raved,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

May all living souls experience such calm nights....

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Flora Gillingham 19 March 2008

Janice expresses my response more articulately than I can manage. Beautifully delicate.

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Janice Windle 18 March 2008

Like all four of the poems of yours that I have read, this is a rich tapestry of images, overlaid one on the other like a delicate collage. Your visual imagination gives your work a special glow and a sparkle, and as someone else has commented, a surreal quality.

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Colombo / Sri Lanka
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