Moonlight falls over
the mountains
Coolness spreads
throughout the air
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You have painted such a serene picture, you have taken the reader into the depths of your poem. well done regards Bob
so refreshing to find beauty in the night...so few see so clearly...beautiful work
lovely way to write my dear friend, so fresh, so happy, so younger soul! thanks for sharing! and keep writing I love to read you!
What a poignant piece.. flow was perfect allowing the words to blend and roll off the tongue as fluent as flowing water.. brilliant imagery Fantastic read
Love your liquid moon and the smooth pace of this poem which is in keeping with it's cool, nocturnal setting. Your share both a love of words and an artist's eye in this pretty poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
you have created very vivid picture of the silence of the night.please read my poems on similar lines-before the day breaks and and after the sunset.
Very warm write, penned with so much tenderness, it is so well expressed you can actually feel the night setting in........Excellent! ! !
Another lovely write and the imagery is a delight to read. You have a wonderful way of expressing the scenes in your work. Great to peruse. love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Excellent. You are a fine word painter. The last stanza resonates with this reader. Warm regards, Sandra
This follows so beautifully on from Island of paradise... special times hey!
night vwhen shines by the flow of the moon making the nature as divine green as when clouds course on gently by the heaven onto the dew...................superb write with imagery of nature when raved,10/10, thanks for sharing
Janice expresses my response more articulately than I can manage. Beautifully delicate.
Like all four of the poems of yours that I have read, this is a rich tapestry of images, overlaid one on the other like a delicate collage. Your visual imagination gives your work a special glow and a sparkle, and as someone else has commented, a surreal quality.
Hemakumar - You must be a peace with the world to see such beauty. Let this vision of this transformation of darkness go from your lips to God's ear, then to men's hearts. Blessings - Cheryl