Still Numerous Comments

Beautifully descriptive writing Catrina and with a commendable theme. Loved it! 10 Karin

Barracuda swam across the reefs Unthreatened from the water squall Unspoiled from withdrawn zeal and ardor Serene by the tides appealing offer.....lovely poem and it is beautiful to swim across unthreatened.....i loved the theme....10

a lovely poem well-crafted with its nature imagery

this is good.. can i be the ell? i always wanted to 'shine my light'

obscurity is there. contents are new. shan

still numerous........across I swim with lago the name breathe.........well written........in brief.......

Let me swim accross the zero... Beautiful...

Enigmatic indeed! Can be interpreted at multiple levels.

enigmatic...your poem and the barracuda both...an affair deep (taking place beneath sea) well told...10

Thought kindling nice little poem!

The wording is so wonderful Nice poetic piece....