Wednesday, February 1, 2023

Still Looking For You Comments

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Still Looking For You
There is the shadow of the maple trees
In many crown leaves I'm looking for you
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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

I'm in agreement with Poet Rebb. And I would go so far as to say...a prayer song. I can hear Elvis Presley singing it from up above. So very inspiring, Mahtab!

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Nosheen Irfan 02 February 2023

Wo superb. The mind might lose the battle but heart can never stop searching for the good things. Beautifully penned.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 01 February 2023

A poem reflecting modern life where the poet's search for peace endless.Very good poem.

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Rob Lamberton 01 February 2023

"Everywhere I'm looking for you- As like the honey bee for flowers, the flute for sweet melody "

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D.N. Rebb 01 February 2023

This could almost be worthy of a prayer. So beautifully written. May you find your Peace.

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