Monday, February 9, 2009

Still Living Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is sorrow-cleft
and wounded i do live
fall from mountain
and drown in salty streams
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Asif Baloch
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ata khan 21 February 2009

beautiful poetry Asif, zabardast keep it up yarra...

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Kesav Easwaran 19 February 2009

good piece...words used have real depth and punch they meant to be...10

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rago rago 18 February 2009

Are not you really still living. You are living and certainly find a ray to live. Beautifully penned.

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