Friday, September 18, 2009

Still Linger Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thinking about you stirs my senses and mind
Blood rushes to my head
Beats come to flash suddenly
My whole body quivers
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Darkness Herself
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Spiritwind Wood 02 October 2009

great poem-we seem to have the same same point of about certin things it a shame we have to hurt to write good poems-excellant job-rated this 10

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Lynda Robson 02 October 2009

Good write, thanks 10 Lynda x

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Shekhar Joshi 01 October 2009

good one....nicely written.........liked it... ;)

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Evaughn Gray 28 September 2009

beautiful piece just put together with amazing talent in mind. You are a very talented poet. keep writing and i'll keep reading! ~ Hazel G.E

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Gwendalynn Ash 28 September 2009

Amazing! it truley did make me remember who I love and love him more.

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Tyrone Wingfield 27 September 2009

beautiful, nothing is more magical than true passion rising. Great write

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Heather r. Stewart 26 September 2009

this is a really good poem poems like this is what makes people wake up and remember who they love...

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Eyan Desir 26 September 2009

Hmmm Good write..nice words

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