Monday, November 21, 2016

Still Life Comments

Rating: ★3.8

On a white porcelain plate
A bunch of green translucent grapes,
Two Washington apples with a knife -
Scene from still life.
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Tan Pratonix
lighting purple yellow
COMMENTS
Tom Billsborough 30 November 2016

You are making me feel hungry! The descriptions are sharp and evocative. Great idea for a poem, Tan.

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Yewande Adedokun 28 November 2016

Like the choice of title and the flow of words to to link the title, the fruits and your precision. Thanks for making me read this. such a beautiful piece.

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Tan Pratonix

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Tan Pratonix
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Triolet, Mauritius
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