Sunday, July 27, 2008

Still Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

crisp pearl apples hemorrhage
splashes of walnut wash

the decay dribbles between
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Indigo Hawkins
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Chloe Young 17 July 2009

i agree the last line is amazing. the imagery is amazing <3

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Daedalus Labyrinth 27 July 2008

I love the last line, it really ties together the idea of the poem and is refreshingly original. Great job

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