Saturday, October 15, 2022

Still, I Wonder Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world seems a strange place tonight.
I feel as an alien
in a foreign land...
I sit, where I oft do, out-of-doors, alone,
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Smoky Hoss
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Bri Edwards 19 December 2022

It starts out pleasant enough, gets a bit spooky, the it gets sort of sad with the sense of uneasiness. Well, it's probably 'heaven' compared to the some people live with. bri

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Bri Edwards 19 December 2022

I'll call this a 'spooky Smoky-poem'. If it is all true, I send my condolances to the poet. If it is all 'made up', I send my congratulations on your skills. If it's some of each, I send 'some of each' perhaps.

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Bri Edwards 19 December 2022

chagrin: one definition: 'noun A keen feeling of mental unease, as of annoyance or embarrassment, caused by failure, disappointment, or a disconcerting event' dang, he needs a roommate.: ( a nice one.

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Glen Kappy 20 November 2022

Smoky, I can't say I've had an experience like this one in your poem, not that I remember. But to answer your question, check out (reread?) Hebrews 11: 13-16. It tells of your home. -Glen

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2022

I mention you BRIEFLY in the un-showcase. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2022

Did I already say five stars? My latest 'showcase' is submitted, this time with no poems nor comments on poems.

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2022

I stumbled on this poem, not knowing it had been a P of the Day till I read a comment. Well, PH got it right this time.

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2022

Ugh! Chagrin! How awful is THAT? ! I think you are from Planet X! Five stars. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2022

IGNORE THE FIRST INCOMPLETE AND PREMATURELY SENT COMMENT! I'M HAVING TROUBLE HERE. ; ( And it is causing me CHAGRIN! ! !

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2022

chagrin: 'Mental disquiet and pain from the failure of aims or plans, want of appreciation, mistaMental disquiet and pain from the failure of aims or plans, want of appreciation, mistakes, etc.; mortification; vexation.'kes, etc.' AND: '

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 13 November 2022

just excellent, really an excellent poem; it seems i'm fully throughout the poetic gist by reading the poem; nice to read; congrats for being selected such type poem as POD

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Sandra Feldman 12 November 2022

Emotionally great! A poem that the whole world, can commemorate. So deep in feeling and sentiments! So far reaching in universal elements. A poem that will live on when so many others will be long gone.

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Ruta Mohapatra 11 November 2022

Congratulations! A question that still hunts mankind...where is home?

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Richard Wlodarski 11 November 2022

So happy that your poem has received the distinction of POD. Heartiest of Congrats, Smoky!

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Belle Wassermeister 11 November 2022

Smoky, great poem, and congrats on poem of the day!

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David Wood 11 November 2022

Great poem Smokey, well done on Poem of the Day too.

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 November 2022

Nice poem. Enjoyed reading. Congrats.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 November 2022

A wonderful poem dear poet. Many congratulations for this excellent poem being selected as Poem of the Day.

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 November 2022

It's always a pleasure to read your poetry. It's like a gentle tune. Soft and comforting. Congratulations on poem of the day! Well deserved x

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2022

This poem does not sound 'comforting' to me! : (

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Miss Ann Thropy 27 October 2022

Congratulations, Smoky! This poem is still on the top member poems list at # 41 today!

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