Still, I Wonder Comments

It starts out pleasant enough, gets a bit spooky, the it gets sort of sad with the sense of uneasiness. Well, it's probably 'heaven' compared to the some people live with. bri

I'll call this a 'spooky Smoky-poem'. If it is all true, I send my condolances to the poet. If it is all 'made up', I send my congratulations on your skills. If it's some of each, I send 'some of each' perhaps.

chagrin: one definition: 'noun A keen feeling of mental unease, as of annoyance or embarrassment, caused by failure, disappointment, or a disconcerting event' dang, he needs a roommate.: ( a nice one.

Smoky, I can't say I've had an experience like this one in your poem, not that I remember. But to answer your question, check out (reread?) Hebrews 11: 13-16. It tells of your home. -Glen

I mention you BRIEFLY in the un-showcase. bri : )

Did I already say five stars? My latest 'showcase' is submitted, this time with no poems nor comments on poems.

I stumbled on this poem, not knowing it had been a P of the Day till I read a comment. Well, PH got it right this time.

Ugh! Chagrin! How awful is THAT? ! I think you are from Planet X! Five stars. : ) bri

IGNORE THE FIRST INCOMPLETE AND PREMATURELY SENT COMMENT! I'M HAVING TROUBLE HERE. ; ( And it is causing me CHAGRIN! ! !

chagrin: 'Mental disquiet and pain from the failure of aims or plans, want of appreciation, mistaMental disquiet and pain from the failure of aims or plans, want of appreciation, mistakes, etc.; mortification; vexation.'kes, etc.' AND: '

just excellent, really an excellent poem; it seems i'm fully throughout the poetic gist by reading the poem; nice to read; congrats for being selected such type poem as POD

Emotionally great! A poem that the whole world, can commemorate. So deep in feeling and sentiments! So far reaching in universal elements. A poem that will live on when so many others will be long gone.

Congratulations! A question that still hunts mankind...where is home?

So happy that your poem has received the distinction of POD. Heartiest of Congrats, Smoky!

Smoky, great poem, and congrats on poem of the day!

Great poem Smokey, well done on Poem of the Day too.

Nice poem. Enjoyed reading. Congrats.

A wonderful poem dear poet. Many congratulations for this excellent poem being selected as Poem of the Day.

It's always a pleasure to read your poetry. It's like a gentle tune. Soft and comforting. Congratulations on poem of the day! Well deserved x

Congratulations, Smoky! This poem is still on the top member poems list at # 41 today!