Tuesday, July 26, 2016

Still I Stand Still Comments

Rating: 5.0

Still I stand here, speechless,
Where I was left to mourn,
Still in a state of slumber I am,
Unperturbed, unmoved.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2022

Loved last two lines....a fantastic poem

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2022

Thank you dear poet Dr Dillip K Swain. Much appreciate your kind appraisal.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

I look at the face which comes in dream in love and still I stand still. Very interesting composition is shared really.10

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Khairul Ahsan 01 June 2020

Thank you, Kumarmani Mahakul, for your kind comment and generous rating.

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Kelly Kurt 29 July 2016

Many of us have felt this sadness of love lost. Well written, Khairul

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Khairul Ahsan 30 May 2020

Thanks for the empathy, @Kelly Kurt. Pleased to have your comment on my poem.

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B.m. Biswas 28 July 2016

a beautiful love poem...though a sense of loss..... a real picture of a lost love....... the execution is imitable...the metaphoric use of the tree is the essence of the greatness..as I think.. of this great poem....thanks for sharing....10++++

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Khairul Ahsan 29 May 2020

Thank you so much, dear poet @B.m. Biswas, for the very inspiring comment you left here. It made my day!

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