Still I stand here, speechless,
Where I was left to mourn,
Still in a state of slumber I am,
Unperturbed, unmoved.
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I look at the face which comes in dream in love and still I stand still. Very interesting composition is shared really.10
Thank you, Kumarmani Mahakul, for your kind comment and generous rating.
Many of us have felt this sadness of love lost. Well written, Khairul
Thanks for the empathy, @Kelly Kurt. Pleased to have your comment on my poem.
a beautiful love poem...though a sense of loss..... a real picture of a lost love....... the execution is imitable...the metaphoric use of the tree is the essence of the greatness..as I think.. of this great poem....thanks for sharing....10++++
Thank you so much, dear poet @B.m. Biswas, for the very inspiring comment you left here. It made my day!
Loved last two lines....a fantastic poem
Thank you dear poet Dr Dillip K Swain. Much appreciate your kind appraisal.