Yesterday I sat against my wall,
enjoying the sunlight on my face.
I was waiting for peace to call,
but it came last in the race.
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Soul touching poem....reaches out to me as I feel the emotion envelop me....smiles n blessings
The heart bleeds continuously, despite our efforts to stop its tears. Interesting.
Very sweet and tender combination of magnificent nature and emotion. A poem that makes our heart a bit softer. It is sooo well written. Congrats Jacqui
Truly a beautiful and heartfelt poem, love is one of the purst emotions I think. Truly well written poem.
Hello this poem is broken heart of poetic style. I really, really like this poem for it contains lot of stanzas of high order........ for instance verses like these....... Then suddenly I was enshrouded, in a sudden darkness of night. The sky also was clouded, as I gave up the fight. Kudos! A big pat on his shoulders dear poet. Proud of you (if only you write poems like these) He! he! he! :) :) :)