I insist …
To batter those
Sharp corners
Of beloved love
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good write.yes, it is sometimes better to quit then carry on with certain relation ships, maybe for the betterment of both.even if it is hard to do.
Nice refrain. The last stanza really appealed to me. The 'Still' does the trick for me. Zmiles!
a gain a very beautiful lines woven in poem with beautiful ideas.thanx for sharing voted10 surya