Thursday, April 27, 2017

Still I Address You Dear Comments

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'Get up old man,
leave your body here from where it rose
I shall carry your soul there
where body is not needed.'
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 27 April 2017

The Angel of death is very rude....! He has to be or else no body will obey him. If he is mild and gentle, death will not happen, as all of us want to live on, no matter how aged we are! However I shall tell him to spare you this time as you have become so indispensable on poem hunter...(ha.... ha!)

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Rajnish Manga 28 April 2017

Thanks for this unique display of a great sense of humour,

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Rajnish Manga 27 April 2017

A deeply philosophical poem- A dialogue with the Angel of death. Very thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing the same. By the way, inverted comma may please be closed towards the end.

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Khalid Saifullah 27 April 2017

One may be like an Angel but if he is rude all his good qualities are overshadowed by his rudeness. A nice message.

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