Still Here Comments

This is simply outstanding piece....thank u.

This is such a thoughtful verse. Very little in life in neutral. When innocence goes, it rarely leaves a void. The lucky ones are those who realize that among the replacements is wisdom and maturity. Great verse, Soul.

This poem reveals the depthness of love of a friend and the loss of treasured friendship. Dear Soul, it is your emotional write with mournful expression. Let it be quoted some lines.... ... Every life has a story, Here is my hidden one Because you never know mine, my dear For you didn't know how many times Silently I've endured pains Secretly i was hurt but never tell How hard i took each of them Believing a day lie than decade of me You gone and back, then return and forget Still i do forgive with no complain, my dear Always I'm here, my hands still up for you Coz we are friends and i still have my promises Still living with me Today Thanks for sharing.

An emotional write of a loss of a treasured friendship. There is now distance between yourself and this person you care for and your hurt and mourning for what once was is evident in your pen.10+++++

Job well done! Very touching, to say the least. Sorry it took so long to read it! Nice

touched my heart with this poem excellent

I read the poem, the notes, the comments....friends have said all, n i agree with everyone...even then i must say it's your admirable work as it touched...

Your poem took my heart. You are more than a superstar! ! Beautiful.

Dogg told me you were good. He was right. You should be 'Written Soul'. You're a very good poet.

What a lovingly delicate soul you are x It reflects so clearly in your art. This is a lovely piece and I enjoyed your description of it as much as the poem itself. Friendships do turn silent from time to time.....but almost always for good reason. Maybe there is the chance to rekindle your old friendship under new terms? I hope so, for the other person, for the loss of your friendship would be a heavy loss indeed.

Very touching and true, superb poem Soul. Siya_! !

so touching soul. i think the memories of our frienship in our childhood last untill end.because those friendships were so pure, honest, and loyal...we certainly enjoyed of those friendships.we may ache those days but they never come back or if they did, they wouldnt be as enjoyable as those days..so LET THE PAST BE THE PAST.. as we grow older i think our friendship become conservitively.so better live in the moment and try to find another honest friendship. or as you ve said: Having the past is not regret. i ve always regret why those honest friendships do not last.. anyway a combination of sadness, regret(although you say you dont have any regret) , love, ....invaded to my mind.wonderful. by the way i didnt know those words you were saying are the part of a great poem! .~nb

What is important is that your heart is great not only for his friend but with everyone. You are different and that is good. LOVE SOUL.

Actually, this is Soul's true spirit. Friendship, Fraternity.......Very nice soul.But, it's not possible to mend friendship if it is denied by your friend.You deserve 10+++++++++Happy New Year Soul!

'Tis a very touchin' poem, Memories never die but promises! ! ! ! Merry Xmas and Happy New Year My soul! ! ! !

This is a beautiful bitter sweet poem which draws upon memories to paint vivid picture All of those people whose lives intersect with ours are important in the intricate tapestry of our lives. Thanks for sharing

This is a very touching write! ! An excursion into the bygone days with its charms, meetings and partings, sweet aches and painful realities! As roads diverge, we proceed ahead in different directions, once in a while looking back! That's life! ! Merry Christmas and a great new Year to you, Soul! !

You do write well but I find your poems very self absorbed and not for me. They tell me nothing of unversal truths nor of the nature of things. Very self indugent and little too introspective non of the wonder of life and its joys and beauty. Live a little you might actually write poetry worth reading. This is just my opinion and I'm sure many people like your stuff. Sorry if I don't. : O(

Wow! So vivid and real expression of sweet and bitter moments of live appealing the real tone of poetry as well in the hearts of all those who believe poetry as the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings. The words really that you used to manage your lines have vitality and life of true poetry in them. I love this poem for both the theme and diction.

Wow this is so touching and I really feel in this same boat. Sad story told. Thank You so much Soul. This is so worth saving and worth a 20