Swimming with Cindy
Magical summers lost,
Bike rides through the city
Laughing beneath autumn trees,
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The image of the scarf flows in front of me as I read your first stanza and the magic of it all. Things change and your last stanza is the lemon icing on the cake! 10 Karin Anderson
nice cognitive metaphor: ''But all I embrace anymore Is my darkness and obscurity.'' wonderful realistic poem.........10
Such rich imagery; one reaches the end with a sigh of disappointment, but a shock of recognition. - Will