Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Still Following Her Scarf Through A Crowd Comments

Rating: 5.0

Swimming with Cindy
Magical summers lost,
Bike rides through the city
Laughing beneath autumn trees,
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Uriah Hamilton
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Will Barber 20 September 2009

Such rich imagery; one reaches the end with a sigh of disappointment, but a shock of recognition. - Will

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The image of the scarf flows in front of me as I read your first stanza and the magic of it all. Things change and your last stanza is the lemon icing on the cake! 10 Karin Anderson

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Marieta Maglas 05 August 2009

nice cognitive metaphor: ''But all I embrace anymore Is my darkness and obscurity.'' wonderful realistic poem.........10

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